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06-08-2008, 03:31 AM
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Idylle House - RP Thread
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The few survivors stumbled up through the heavy jungle, bunched into friendship and family groups, devided.
They marched through the jungle, hungry and thirsty, when they saw the house.
The house was huge. It appeared to be made entirely out of white marble as it shone in the early morning light. The windows were all closed but the door was wide open.
The survivors had found a place to collapse from exhustion after all.
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06-08-2008, 03:48 AM
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Zani, Riviera and Courtney all collapsed the moment they reached the house, each with identical smiles on their faces, "We made it Girls" Zani said laughing the other two Joining in.
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06-08-2008, 03:58 AM
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Lance smiled as he let go of his sister, letting her stand on her own wobbly feet,
"And you're the one who took the micky out of me for not passing my army physical. You stopped walking about a mile ago!" he laughed but stopped when Jessica fell on top of two of a group of three girls. He hauled her upright to see her laughing,
"The look on your face was priceless Lance." she giggled wildly. Lance ingored her,
"Sorry about that."
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06-08-2008, 04:03 AM
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Zani stood up, looking down at Courtneys blushing face, "It's no problem is it girls?" THe other two smiled and stood up "No problem at all" Zani nodded, "I'm Zain and these are my sisters..." Courtney stepped foward "I'm courtney" Then riviera stepped foward "And i'm rivieara"
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06-08-2008, 04:06 AM
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Jessica raised her eyebrow,
"Triplets eh? Very nice..." he looked the girls up and down descretely but Lance still saw her and hit her in the arm,
"I'm Lance and this is my sister Jessica. It's nice to meet you."
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06-08-2008, 04:15 AM
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Zani smiled getting the hint from Jessica, "It's a pleasure to meet you both" Zani grabbed Courtney's arm and pushed her gently in the direction of Jessica, before turning her attention back to lance, while Riviera went to observe the house,.
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06-08-2008, 05:21 AM
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Nick collapsed onto the ground next to Zani, and studied her body.
"WOOP! Triplets! GREAT!" he stirred on the ground, moving his arm around Zani.
"Look, babe, I'm hot, sweaty and need some booze. I need cheering up. Which one of you three are good at that, or is it all of you?"
As Zani shot him a dangerous glance, he chuckled and patted her as close to the backside as he could get.
"I have no idea where we are, but we've got loads of time and some nice girls.
Now we need some booze from that fancy ol' mansion over there."
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Boris did not sit down. He moved throughout the group, seeing if everyone is alright.
"OK... Lance, you look pretty fit..." Boris gave Nick a hard stare as he giggled pathetically, "You look physically fit. Want to come check out his house with me?" He said in a thick Russian accent.
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Glen collapsed and heaved in the warm afternoon air.
He studied his new companions carefully. When he was staring at Jessica, she looked over to him and smiled, causing him to blush greatly. He quickly looked away and started studying his surroundings instead.
They were in some sort of thick jungle on an island. Typical horror movie, he thought.
The house was made of white marble, which wasn't rare in the ancient days. What surprised Glen was the fact that if it was made in the ancient days, and the island was once joined with main land, then why were there no more man-made structures?
If it was not ancient, then why would the owner of a house just leave an island which they could sell for millions.
One thing was for sure: this mansion wasn't inhabited.
This place sent unnatural shivers running down Glen's spine, and it wasn't the fact that he's just been thrown overboard and would probably never be found again.
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06-08-2008, 02:32 PM
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Lance shot a glance at Nick,
"You really think now is the best time to try and get lucky? You must be bloody desparate. But if you try anything Jessica is likely to break your arm. She likes that one as well." he grimaced as Jessica punched him in the arm,
"Shut up Lance." she said with a blush. Lance looked up at Boris,
"Yeah I'll come with. I got something for if we find anything... undesirable around here. Lead the way comrade."
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06-08-2008, 03:25 PM
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Boris moved closer to the door, with Lance close behind him. His huge build let him walk straight through the large branches, often hitting Lance in the head (which he was quick to apologize for).
As they approached the door, Boris pulled out the Taser he had been issued by the cruise managers. he held it to his side, with his finger on the trigger and the safety off.
Once he was at the door to the mansion, Boris held up a hand for Lance to be quiet. He moved closer to the locked door, before counting to three in his head.
On three, he landed a spine-cracking kick to the door, causing it to shudder and much of the wood to splinter.
By the time he had taken his second kick, the middle of the door was hanging on the inside by the last tender strings of wood. Boris moved the rest away with his hands, before crawling through and checking both sides of the hallway for people.
When he was clear, he signaled for Lance to follow him inside...
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06-08-2008, 11:45 PM
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Lance walked inside calmly, his hands by his sides. He walked past Boris and flicked his knife out as he walked through into a huge hallway. Lance pointed two fingers at the stairs.
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06-09-2008, 05:32 AM
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Zani shook her head and kicked Nick away from her, "Riviera might be up for that crap, she went that way" she tilted her head then looked over at Jessica, grinning evily before she turned to Courntey who went bright red,
"W-what?" Courtney stuttered looking at her sister, Zani smiled, "Your so crushing on her already arn't you?" Zani's voice was no louder than a whisper but Courtney continued to blush,
"You can tell?" Zani nodded, "your to shy"
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rivieara looked around the house not really paying attention to what was going on around her, not noticing that her sisters hadn't followed her.
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06-09-2008, 11:43 PM
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Lance heard footsteps coming round near the backdoor so flattened himself against the wall until the footsteps were closer. When the footsteps had just past the door he walked out and grabbed the person from behind before dragging them into the house. He held onto the person tightly until he got a clear look at her face,
"Oh god...! Rivieara I am so sorry!" he let go of her quickly and put his knife away before she could see it and freak out.
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06-10-2008, 12:16 AM
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Rivieara smiled, "It's okay, just please don't do it again"
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06-10-2008, 12:42 AM
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Lance went a bit red,
"What the dragging you inside a house part or the touching you breast by accident as i drag you into a house?"
Jessica winked at Courtney,
"We gunna go into the house love?"
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06-10-2008, 12:44 AM
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Courntey went bright red and turned to Zani looking for advice and aproval, Zani just laughed and walked past the pair, "It's your life sis" courntey blushed and turned back to Jessica nodding, "yeah, okay"
Rivieara, "Both, You seen my sisters?"
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