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06-25-2008, 12:32 AM
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Eliana put the shirt on before running over to John and kissing him, "I love you John and i won't go too far, promise"
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06-25-2008, 12:39 AM
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John nodded and watched as she left. He went over to the kitchen and got out two cups,
"Coffee Gabriel?"
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06-25-2008, 04:16 AM
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Ink Slinger
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Eliana looked at Conner, "Okay, lets go where ever it si you want to take me"
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06-25-2008, 11:39 AM
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Location: A lonely little Farmer's Market called Kent.
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Gabriel made a small nod in John's direction, before turning back to the female. He had seen her somewhere, and her body language was familiar. She was definitely a Seraph, and obviously close with Eliana.
It was Conner.
Her body was so different, and the male voice had been lost. Gabriel was (very rarely) allowed to see down to the Earth from the Creator's womb, and often saw Conner and Eliana, but never had he seen Conner like this.
He grinned to the woman standing in front of him, as he could see she was bordering on the line of realization.
Deciding a common phrase was the best way to go, he spoke to her for the first time with speech.
"The truth will always be painful, Conner. What you must remember is the results, and you will feel better."
It was what Gabriel used to say to Conner when she first became a Seraph. He was always like a mentor to most Seraphs, but Conner and Eliana especially. This comment would surely spark recognition in Conner.
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06-25-2008, 11:43 AM
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#320
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John brought Gabriel's coffee through with him and with his sword and black armour,
"Excuse me for a moment Gabriel. I have to get dressed."
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06-25-2008, 04:10 PM
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Lovash stopped breathing, it was him. She knew it was from the first step she took into the room but now she was sure of it. She studied his appearance, the creator had been kind to him, Micheal had not been so lucky.
But those words that he spoke, they had always been true. It had been Gabriel who had told Conor of the results of the accident for he was the creators messanger. She turned to the portal.
"Aren't you going to stop me?" She asked half putting her hand through the faltering air. "You know of my plan I'm sure, he would have known I'm sure of it."
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06-25-2008, 11:09 PM
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Eliana shut her eyes as Gabriel spoke to Conner, guilt suddenly flowing through her. She loved John, and she knew he loved her, but they way she acted...the way she treated Gabriel was beyond anything. However she didn't turn around she didnt' look at him,
"come on Conner, show me what you need to show me"
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06-26-2008, 02:48 PM
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Lovash half smiled before catching Eliana's hand and moving completely through the portal. Sighing on the other end, she and Eliana were standing beneath a large canopy of ever green greens. The ground a mixture of clay and broken branches.
"He punished you I see." Lovash turned and inspected the tail and ears. Somehow the feline look only made her look more sexual then she already was. "But thats not why I brought you here."
She closed the portal behind her watching as the faltering air cleared.
"I. . . I. . ." She sighed, there was no way of explaining it until Eliana had seen what she had seen. So she held out a hand and opened another portal, this time right outside the deep mist, some of it seeping through into the forest.
"Come with me. I'll show you and then you can listen to what I have to say."
She stepped through and waited for Eliana to finish coming, she looked cold as her shirt wasn't really cold resistant. Together they moved through the fog quickly, and reached the edge of the eternal darkness. It had expanded again with the growing souls entering its being.
"The gloom." Lovash extended a hand towards the darkness, she shivered with uncertainty.
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06-27-2008, 03:39 AM
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#324
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"He punished you I see."
Eliana nodded sadly as she wagged her wolf like tail, "yeah" was all she could answer as she followed Conner,
"Come with me. I'll show you and then you can listen to what I have to say."
Eliana nodded following Conner, as the pair stopped Eliana gasped, Souls walking into an eternal darkness, she barly noticed as Conner spoke. Closing her eyes and turning away Eliana whispered,
"Why are you showing me this conner?"
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06-27-2008, 03:54 PM
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Lovash turned to Eliana, and smiled slightly.
"Existance after death is lonely and everlasting in the Gloom." Lovash turned back to the Gloom. "The worst punishment for all good and evil."
She sighed and watched her heavy breath rise into the mist.
"My goal, is to cut open a whole in the gloom." She heard Eliana take a breath. "I wish to free those within it's grasp and when the war starts, the Gloom will be as connected to the mortal world as the Creator is." She took another long breath and continued. "I'm going to sacrifice myself for all that lie within it's wake. Eliana, you and John are special. Don't ever forget that. John is the key to bringing peace to the war. I'll deal with death and you must deal with life." Lovash turned around and kissed Eliana gently on the cheek and held out her hand.
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06-28-2008, 11:53 PM
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#326
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"I'm going to sacrifice myself for all that lie within it's wake. Eliana, you and John are special. Don't ever forget that. John is the key to bringing peace to the war. I'll deal with death and you must deal with life."
Eliana nodded, knowing what conner said was true, closign her eyes a single tear flowed down her cheek, she hugged Conner before hand, "I'm going to miss you you know that right?" she let conner go and took her hand, forcing a smile.
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06-30-2008, 07:54 AM
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Lovash smiled and nodded.
"I have tried to feel the same as you." Her smile faded. "But I failed. I cannot feel like that towards someone." She took another deep breath. "Protect him Eliana. As for me, your thoughts should not linger on me. I had my hands tied by the creator when the accident occured." She opened a portal to the room they had previously been in. "Now with my hands undone, I shall repair the flaw in the creators work with my own existance."
She motioned for Eliana to go through.
"Go, be careful. Gabriel will learn the truth of John. But what he does when he finds out, might be from his own heart."
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07-07-2008, 07:29 PM
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"Go, be careful. Gabriel will learn the truth of John. But what he does when he finds out, might be from his own heart."
Eliana nodded trying hard not to look back at Connor, keeping her eyes trained on John.
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07-08-2008, 03:54 PM
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John flipped his sword over in his hand repeatedly, testing the weight of the blade. He stopped when he saw Eliana emerge again,
"You okay Eli? I have to say it's been boring here without you. Gabriel isn't very talkative."
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07-09-2008, 12:55 AM
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Elian smiled as she walked over to John and huged him, "I know protectors tend to be really really boring"
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