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Old 04-20-2008, 07:35 PM   #1
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sigh... Another RPG, I guess.

It is decided that we will be re-creating Graying Horizons!
Story: It is the year 325AA (After Apocalypse). Those who have committed crimes are sent to satellite like prisons. These prisons have no guards and is completely ran off of a computer. The prisoners are controlled by electric collars that will shock them if they do anything bad(Ie: kill each other, act violently, are not at the right place at the right time).
Our story takes place on one such satellite in the deepest confides of the Polaris Star System. It is called the Nebula. One fateful day, an inmate is murdered..... That's the gist of it. We'll still need to discuss stuff.

Here's our current members: (Still a bit lonely in here)
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Past occupation/experience: (This will be very important in the future)
Time: (How long is you sentence)
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Other: (add anything of interest here, like if you were genetically altered or something.)
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Old 04-21-2008, 03:13 AM   #2
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I'll see where the discussion goes, contributing here and there, and I'll join if i like the idea
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Old 04-21-2008, 04:08 AM   #3
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Me too Mi

I'll be the moderator again, okay?
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Hey, mi how bout you start Greying horizons again?, it was a great idea, just this time Shinn don't flirt with everyone straight up, keep the plot interesting and move it along instead of just focusing on your little romantic sub plot.
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Shinn flirted?! Wow... haven't seen that in an RP yet
and what about the plot of 'Greying horizons'?
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from what i can remember its' a futuristic one, and we're all prisioners in a cell on the moon. There are no guards but we wear a shock collar that activates when we think about being violent and will kill us if we leave. Theres a murder in the cell which sends everyone into a panic as there are no guards we, the players have to find out who it is ourselves.
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Old 04-21-2008, 05:56 AM   #7
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cool....! sounds good. I'm definately in.
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Old 04-21-2008, 06:00 AM   #8
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Sweet, it's decided Mi, and i'll be a mod too to make sure it keeps running.
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How the idea of greying horizons, but expand on that idea further before trying to restart it. The moderators, should chat either in a multiple instant messange chat, or by pming each other. That way they know what they are doing, and the players don't know every detail of your plans.
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starting to feel left out of the creative process but this still sounds good
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Awh! Poor Nefi. You like a shy school boy at the back of the classroom hoping no-one looks at him. =P Chime in duuuuuude!
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Okay dokey. No more love, buddy... I guess we could re-do graying horizons, though I think I'll change my character. She was kinda boring. Shinn, RB! Let us plot! I will send you countless PM's. Faustlings really liked the old one, I wonder if we could somehow find him and tell him we're doing a re-do. Oh yes, I'd look at the begining post, because I'm gana change it right.... now.
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Hey, mi how bout you start Greying horizons again?, it was a great idea, just this time Shinn don't flirt with everyone straight up, keep the plot interesting and move it along instead of just focusing on your little romantic sub plot.
Okay RB, I promise not to do that again.

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and what about the plot of 'Greying horizons'?
Yes, it's true Nefi... I'll make 56 more realistic this time around, and he'll be only interested in escaping, and no love story.
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hehe. You could always make his love torment a sub plot for the poor dude.
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Good idea Aura. I'll take it up with the fellow mods.

Anyways, here's my revised character bio -

Name: John J. Quinlan

Alias: "56"

Age: 33

Past occupation/experience: Sergeant with Special Tactics Command.

Time: Two life sentences (one for each of his victims).

Crime(s): Murder of his ex-wife and her new lover.

Appearance: Shaggy black hair, ice blue eyes and multiple scars on his face, arms and chest.

Personality: Quiet and reserved, but can be outspoken sometimes.

History: A sharpshooter in the STC, he was responsible for the deaths of many criminals. He heard from a friend that his wife had signed divorce papers and was with his best friend. He wanted revenge, so he went to her house and he found them making love... He took out his pistol, and fired six times; three bullets for both of them... He was arrested, found guilty, and he was sentenced to two consecutive life sentences for the double murder.

Other: Was genetically altered into one of the STC's failed "Super Cop" prototypes.

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Will we be continuing from where we were last time Mi?
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