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07-03-2008, 03:20 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Nowhere special...just...bird watching...yeah, sure...bird watching...
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James wrapped his arms around Maggie until his mouth was almost touching her ear,
"It'll look like I'm trying to comfort you."
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07-03-2008, 01:25 PM
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She knelt her head into his chest and began to sniff and make fake crys.
"A kiss on the head maybe?" Maggie smiled, although it was hidden from everyone. "But I think you wanted to kiss me, how is it? Is he near enough yet?"
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07-03-2008, 11:55 PM
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#618
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James glanced at Pestilence,
"He's just about to help lower the coffin into the grave. When they start lowering it we grab him."
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07-04-2008, 04:57 PM
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Maggie felt herself grab james jacket tight.
"Either we do it before the lowering, or after." Maggie's voice was stern. "If that coffin breaks or something happens to the body, where will your honour be then?"
She let go of the jacket and turned to look at Pestilance and the coffin.
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07-05-2008, 12:04 AM
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James gripped his sword's handle,
"This was never about honour. It was always about getting Flare back."
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07-08-2008, 08:22 PM
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Location: America...
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Wow...have you guys been busy while I was out of touch with the 'net. Good thing I'm also technically out of touch with the School as Dru.
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07-09-2008, 10:55 AM
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Yeah, lol, we were kinda on a roll (or rather one or two rolls to be closer to the truth)
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07-09-2008, 02:45 PM
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Lower the coffin already! The wait is killing me!
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07-10-2008, 12:16 AM
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LOL
The coffin slowly touched the bottom of the grave and James nodded before sprinting towards his uncle. Pestilence turned in time ti see James flying through the air at him. James land on top of Pestilence, throwing him to the floor. He punched the bug encrusted face repeatedly,
"Now! Where is Flare!"
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07-19-2008, 02:29 AM
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Flare didnt' look up as Faith walked slowly down into the cell area, she didn't flinch as she began to speak despite the amout of effort she was going to to moch her,
"Oh, little Faithy, How will you cope once you see what you little boyfriends been up to" Flare shut her eyes tightly fighting hard to keep faith out of her mind, but to no avail she simply didn't have the energy anymore. In her mind Faith only played on event, one simple fresh memory that appeared to faith to be fairly recent. The single event of James, turning slowly, (or at least that's how it appeared to her) and kissing maggi, a girl she had thought to be her friend. It was in that exact moment that Flare lost all hope in everything, breaking down she began to cry,.
Faith had won.
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07-19-2008, 02:36 AM
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Pestilence swore and pushed his nephew off of him,
"You're still alive?!" he drew his diseased sword, "Well you won't be for long!"
James ducked under the attacking sword and slammed his knee between his uncle's legs and watched as he crumpled to the floor. He held his sword above Pestilence's neck,
"Call to your accomplice. Now!"
"Faith!" Pestilence called out with his mind.
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07-19-2008, 02:42 AM
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Faith rolled her eyes, "I'll leave you with that little image Flare, I'm being called" With that she walked up into the libary, before sending a message to Pest,
"What is it? I was busy"
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07-19-2008, 02:48 AM
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Pestilence looked up at James' sword,
"Need a little help here. James found me."
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07-19-2008, 02:52 AM
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"I've got no long range at the moment, Portal please" She said with a grin.
Flare sat in her cell stairing at the brick wall oposite her, trying hard to forget what she had seen.
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07-19-2008, 02:54 AM
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Pestilence slowly opened the portal as not to alarm James,
"My accomplice is coming now."
James growled,
"This better not be a trick."
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