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Old 05-03-2007, 03:05 PM   #1
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Infernal Empire Affairs Thread

HERE'S THE PLOT SO FAR;

So, I'll take it you're all aware we've been busted out of our cell?

I'll do this in sections;

JigSaw and Krystal headed for the medi-bay, while there we patched eachother up, Krystal pocketed a few needles, and I revealed to her my history with the name 'Krystal'. She revealed her family had been slaughtered in front of her. We now have a common reason for fighting Rubaz. We got into Rubaz uniforms and took up arms. Then we were intruded on by Tsaeb's character. He had my characters gun, which he gave back to me. He also has explosives, plus the control to Krystal's sky wolf. The vehicle we areall gonna use to get out of the prison.

Meanwhile Blossom's character Jupiter came searching for us and found us. She has us at gun point and I'm trying to negotiate a deal whereby Renos and Tsaeb can go free, and Jupiter can keep me captive.

Orin has gone off on his own to look for Kiz. He came across a computer, typed ehr name in and found that Kiz has been relocated to Scotland.

Petrovich and Rena have partnered up. They have been destroying Rubaz left and right, having taken Crazed Scribes character hostage. They are working there way through the prison and seem to be heading for the armory.
I believe that is everyone now?

So...... As it stands our goal is to all meet at the front of the Rubaz compound and head and get the hell out of this place in Krystal's Sky Wolf which will hold us all. None of us but Orin are supposed to know about Kiz being in Scotland yet, so that revelation will come. Going to Scotland will be our characters long-term goal once we find out about it.

Any questions?


NEW PLOT UPDATE:
Petrovich, Krystal, Orin, Dergut, Rena, and Nayr are fighting some Rubaz then you're all heading for W4 Block entrance to escape.

I am in the meantime heading to a vantage point to shoot all of the guards blocking your escape. You'll all get in Krystals Sky Wolf and fly out of here, and I'll be leaving in a Craft with Jupiter.

Jupiter has turned over to our side but only JigSaw knows that at this point.

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OK, I decided to start this up so everyone doesn't need to post in the actual RPG any comments, statements, questions etc. Post any of your comments about the RPG here and then we can keep the other thread strictly RPG.

My first question, Blossom, can you hold off before gettin to the medi-bay for a while as I just want a little character devlopment and revelation between JigSaw and Krystal about why their relationship has started as it has.
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:08 PM   #2
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Nice one short tooth, may i also ask something.

Okay aura? anyhoo, i was just wondering what guard you're talking about as your last post didnt specify.
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:24 PM   #3
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No problemo ST.
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:25 PM   #4
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I'm thinking, depending on what you think once you are in the room with me and krystal we could talk you oer to our side, at least temporarily? Your call though. We can see where the RPG takes us
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:26 PM   #5
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Okay i'm taking over from BW for a week
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:30 PM   #6
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Understood fella, as a trusted narrative mover (A wonderful privilege bestowed upon me by BW), I'll try and keep things at the best pace, and move everything in the right direction. (I'm on here quite a lot)
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Old 05-03-2007, 03:46 PM   #7
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thnx we need all the help we can get with the disappearance of our leader BW.
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Well I'll make sure there's no hot heads or overly superior people. Keep it moving smooth as it has been so far
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Ly you cleared that up for me , the one on your shoulder, sorry might have skimmed your post then, i was prob in a rush.
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Just so everyone knows, upon recommendation, I will edit the first post in this thread every 2 or 3 days so that it keeps the story updated so those who have been a way for a while or just need a recap can come in and check out how the story's flowing.
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Thanks short tooth, and thanks aura, now thats cleared up i've posted again, i think its time rena and petrovich got going.
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I know Ly, they need weapons and much much more. lol
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Not too quick folks.Blood Writer made me and Aura the story movers so we gotta keep it at a nice pace, no one can escape from the prison as of yet. Also, try and make your characters have a smaller goal, you know some short term thing like something to look for or something that drives the character.
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hey i'm a plot kicker 2
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ok dude, but don't rush too much now. it's gonna take us a hella long time to get to scotland so lets just pace ourselves.
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