Bika

Not sure this is the correct forum, but meh.

Pretty straightforward - write a lyric.

Catch1: The lyric must be about staying in a relationship past the relationship's use-by date.

Catch2: Post your lyric on this thread - it can't be posted previously in the Lyrics forum. New ones only please.

Closes: 5th December.
Judging: Me, plus two more volunteers please (PM me). Judges can't enter. Thamior and Mystery, don't ask to be judges

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Cornish Maid

Hi Bika,
I'm not sure if this is the sort of thing you want but what the hell!

Out of body
And out of mind
The words you said
Were so unkind.

Without truth
And said in hate
The lies you told
Left no debate.

You were the one
That I loved so
But you hurt me still
And told me to go.


I've left out the last verse becuse that would automatically disqualify me from the competition.

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Some people walk in the rain; others just get wet! (Roger Miller)

Bika

Yup, that'll do, ta

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