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Old 06-03-2008, 01:58 PM   #1
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Hello everyone.
I am an e-publisher of most genres and I just wanted to let you know about my website. www.heartsonfirepress.com

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Old 06-04-2008, 12:17 AM   #2
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Hi "Hearts"

Look, please don't take this as an insult or slighting, but your site is an incredible mess. All those little goofy animated gifs do anything but paint a picture of professionalism or people who know what they are doing.

I'd strongly suggest you clean it up and replace those three spreding mold cultures or whatever with copy regarding who you are and what you do.

Ditto the guy inexplicably kissing a fish on a writing site.

Another thing...and a lot of small publishing sites do this...WHY have all these buttons take people to EMPTY category pages? You wear out the interest of people who keep clicking them for nothing and having to back out.

Just remove the link and leave them dead if there's nothing to see there.

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Old 06-04-2008, 01:00 AM   #3
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Hi,
Thank you for your suggestions. I just wanted to say that I have only had my site for about two weeks so I am new to this. I had it plain and simple and somebody said that it was too bland so that it why I added the animated items. I just went in and deleted all of the animation and took off the blank links. I do think that it is somewhat bland now. So any suggestions would be helpful.

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Old 06-04-2008, 01:35 AM   #4
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Well top marks for accepting constructive criticism and acting on it. Though I'm disappointed I missed the man kissing a fish.
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Bland is good, for websites. Bland says "I want this to be easy for you to read and use, and I'm more worried about content than presentation."
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First congratulations on going forward with your ambitions. Many people dream but never do.

As far as suggestions for your site, it has a clean, easy to navigate sense right now. As has been mentioned, too much stuff just frustrates users as they try to find whatever it is they seek. As you grow, make sure to give your reader valuable and useful info, not distracting graphics.

One other note, I strongly suggest you have someone edit your site as I found several errors without reading too far. No matter how good a writer or editor we are of other people's work, it's common to read right past our own typos and mistakes.

Since your site will probably be the biggest representation of the work you do and the products you produce, attention to such details is needed to communicate the treatment you will give to other people's submissions.

Hope this is helpful.
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Try placing one of the cooler book covers up top beside the welcome message. A little larger. The tiger one would be great. You can change it from time to time...maybe have a "Featured Title of the Month" caption under it.

I'd recommend you get away from frames. Study the source files of sites you like the looks of.

Put a TITLE in the title metatag. HEARTS OF FIRE PRESS: Wonderful Fricking Books

no need to have your URL in the keywords..in fact, that might mess you up.

Get a stat counter, set it for invisible, and put it on every page so you'll know who's visiting and where they came from.
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