Lets make a story!! - Writers Forum

kaytea111 · 07-09-2007, 10:37 AM

Ok, so this is how it goes- I create a parapraph and then ther next person adds onto it with another paragraph. Easy as that. We should end up with a nice story.

So, who ever is ready to start the story can give it a try.

I wont start it because I wanna see how this story starts and ends.

Modern Prometheus · 07-10-2007, 11:38 AM

Daniel rushed to the sink, his heart beating fast. He glanced at himself in the bathroom mirror. "Danny, you really did it this time." He turned on the faucet full blast and washed the blood off of his shaking hands.

The girl left behind... · 07-10-2007, 11:47 AM

"I'll never be the same again," he muttered to himself. How on earth did he kill that girls cat? The look on her face was still fresh in his mind. He knew he shouldn't have chosen today to become a ninja.

Charlie_Eleanor · 07-10-2007, 12:18 PM

But being a ninja was his destiny. At least that is what his mother always told him. Speaking of his mother, he should visit her in the mental ward soon. Perhaps under the cover of darkness. But, she would probably be pissed about the dead cat. She loved cats.

I-Play-Bass · 07-19-2007, 07:20 PM

Daniel had never really liked cats in the first place. When he watched cats and dogs he basked along with the dogs in their victory over the feline terrors. He went to the musical "Cats" purposely to distract the actors. It only seemed right to him that when he got his first shuriken that he would seek vengance on cats, after the way they troubled him before.

Dirk Embers · 07-24-2007, 02:26 PM

Daniel wiped his hands clean, and took a regretful look back at the half torn pussy on the bathroom floor, face slashed ear to ear, a clear look of shock still etched in expression as he had jumped out at it from behind the bins.

But no time to waste, he had to get rid of the body quickly before the RSPCA came round. the stupid little girl had said she would call them. At least thats what he thought she had mummbled through the tears.

Daniel looked back into the mirror and seethed. 'that little girl was a nuisance that need to be removed.'

SecretSam · 07-24-2007, 02:54 PM

"Daniel"

He heard the voice in his head again.

"Daniel you forgot to take your medicine again didn't you?"

That voice, that irritating voice that always came with the headaches, the color of red, and the murder. Daniel looked at his hands again. They were clean. The cat? Gone. Did he imagine the whole thing? Was he late for the Ninja academy or school. No. It was work! He looked up and saw his mother standing there.

"Daniel? Your medicine? Here, take it dear."

Stevos · 07-24-2007, 07:08 PM

"Thanks," Daniel mumbled. He'd had one of those dreams again. He sighed and swallowed the pill. This one tasted like cherry. They seemed to change flavors every day. He had kept track of them. Lemon, Apple, Grape, Lime, Blueberry, and today, Cherry. He took a great gulp of water to wash it down with.

Daniel sat up. He looked around. This was, at least, his room. There were times when he had awoken from one of his dreaded dreams where he was out on the street, the horn of a car that wouldn't slow down waking him up, or times where he was on the roof, or even the one time when he was attempting to bury himself underground. That one still haunted his thoughts.

He glanced at his clock. It was flashing 12:00. Power outage he thought. He looked at his mother. "What time is it?"

Nillani · 07-24-2007, 11:23 PM

"Time to get up. You've got to get ready for school. Get up."
"But mum..."
"Now."

Daniel groaned and slowly heaved himself out of bed. What is it with mums and getting up, anyway? He yanked on his school shirt and a pair of shorts.

"The bus is here, Daniel! I hope you're ready, because if you miss it you're walking!"

Daniel swore, grabbed his bag and ran out the door.

SecretSam · 07-25-2007, 08:40 AM

And thats when he saw her. She was standing their in front of the school bus. She was holding in her hand her dead kitten. She lowered her head and raised a rusty red stained finger accusing him.

"You killed her! You killed Mittens!!"

Sweat coated Daniel's body.

"No! I didn't mean to! I di- I didn't want to!" But he knew better...

Othello-Jane · 07-25-2007, 12:34 PM

"I hate you! I hate you!" She screamed loudly.

Daniel gulped, her eyes turning deep, red. Her teeth began to change, becoming more pointed, her hair becoming unruly. Daniel backed away, unsure of what was going on. Was this a dream?

SecretSam · 07-26-2007, 01:12 PM

The color red... her eyes... his head. It ached. It pulsed. The ringing sound grew louder and the whole world melted away....

Daniel gradually opened his eyes. A man dressing in a white lab coat was standing there talking to his mother.

"He's been having those episodes again. We'd better keep him here for another month, just to make sure."

His mother was frowning. He hated when she did that. He moaned.

"Oh my poor poor baby." His mother said.

Daniel was trying to tell her. He had to tell her what was going on. His tounge was heavy in his mouth.

Der_Parvenu_Meister · 08-07-2007, 02:29 PM

He could never say the cause of it all. Clancyboy. He was driven to his actions by Clancyboy. The way he would call and breathe so heavily. The way he drove slowly by at night in his Pussy Wagon. How could he not have done what he did?

Clancyboy had caused it all and now here he was, stuck for another month. Daniel wasn't mad, it was Clancyboy.

Some say Clancyboy was American, some say he escaped Hitler's bunker in 1945 when they realised he was Satan. Either way the cause of all the worlds evil, and all of daniels problems were clear.

Clancyboy.

Mr Write · 09-14-2007, 07:58 PM

He opened his mouth to tell them what they needed to know, no sound came out, he couldn’t speak, must be the drugs they had him on.

His mother and the doctor walked out into the hallway and shut the door behind him, “we’ll check on him in another month to see if there is any improvement”

Nillani · 09-16-2007, 01:56 AM

His eyes widened. What was going on here? He saw someone coming toward him out of the corner of his eye, holding something.

"Don't worry, this won't hurt a bit..." and a laugh - well, more of a snicker, really.

No, no- Daniel felt himself slipping from reality, spiralling back into that world, back where they'd sent him...