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Mr Write · 09-17-2007, 04:37 PM

He stood up and shivered, dead cats surrounded him, his ninja training had paid of . “What did you do to my cats” the little girl screamed, tears ran down her blood soaked face. The girl had to be removed and he knew just how to do it

Nillani · 09-17-2007, 10:17 PM

He quickly grabbed her, threw her over his shouldr and started jogging towards the beach kiosk. An ice-cream would do it. Yeah, thought Danny, that'll make her shut up. He checked his pocket for coins, and found he had just enough for two ice-creams.

Mr Write · 09-19-2007, 06:54 PM

The guy in the kiosk looked up at him, his nose was red and eyes puffy, Daniel suspected the guy had already sneezed in the ice-cream, but he had to shut the girl up somehow.
As he reached for the ice-cream he felt weak, his arm weighed down on him and he lowered it to his side, he turned to the girl, she looked concerned and then slowly began to melt away from existence.

Nillani · 09-20-2007, 02:14 AM

Daniel yelped, and stepped back, eyes wide. What the hell was going on? He frowned. Was this just the world of his imagination? And if so, could anything he imagined come true? He turned around and began to walk back slowly. This was a pretty amazing thing, if true. He decided to test out his thoery, and imagined he was holidaying in Florida. Immeadiately, the sun got warmer and the sea bluer. All the clouds melted away, and he was transformed into a tanned surfer wearing a wettie. He began to get excited. Imagine what he could do!

jali · 09-25-2007, 02:28 PM

"Congratulations."
Daniel turned around so quickly, he lost his balance and sat abruptly down in the sand. He peered up at the source of the voice - this one wasn't like the others he was used to hearing. This one sounded so...real...
"Congratulations. You have passed the first test." said The Voice.

Mr Write · 10-01-2007, 01:30 PM

“What” he groaned, he couldn’t see the guys face and so squinted through the sunlight. “You’ve passed the first test” said the voice again, Daniel suddenly became aware of how ridiculous this all seemed. Was he still in the hospital or was this real, either way the guy talking to him made him feel uneasy.
He closed his eyes tight and after a few seconds opened them again, the guy still stood there looking down at him, his attempt at wishing him away had failed.

The girl left behind... · 10-01-2007, 06:07 PM

The voice he found out was a man with an unusually large afro. "Because you passed the test," said the afro man, "You are to go on to the second test." Danial looked at him, agast. "Why am i taking these test? I don't want to do this." Danial struggled to his feet and started to stumble away through the sand." "I think you do, Danial, eternal life doesn't come free. You must prove yourself." Danial stopped.

Mr Write · 10-05-2007, 11:52 AM

“Eternal life?” he asked, “why yes Daniel don’t you remember” “remember, remember what” he shouted back at the man. A huge gust of wind knocked him forward and in a blink the man was gone and he was now standing in an empty room.
“I am getting really sick of this” Daniel shouted, his voice echoed around him, he was alone, and he had the strangest feeling that something really bad was about to happen.