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Old 06-22-2008, 08:01 AM   #1
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Setting up the characters

In my YA I have my prologue written (coincidently its in my sig). None of 'good guys' are in the prologue but I jumped straight into the action so as to hook the reader.

Now I'm revising my first chapter. I'm worried that because it doesn't really have much action, it will loose it's appeal. I think it's essential to set up Ally (my main gal) because the events that happen in the book are tied to her and her background.

However, she's not the only character to introduce - she needs to meet three other characters before the action starts up again.

I'm just wondering if anyone has had similar problems and how you would go about it.
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Old 06-22-2008, 08:59 AM   #2
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If you're worried too much about action, but can't place any in the opening, use foreshadowing to garner interest and anticipation. Though I'm very poor at it, I personally like to snare readers by making them interested in the characters themselves, then slowly transitioning into the heart of the action. Plenty of authors tend to meander through a few chapters without diving into the thick of things. I just finished a book that took about half of it's pages to do so. Now, that book did a bad job of it, as I was never really interested in the setting or the characters, but it's a common method and works fantastically when done correctly. A good batch of characters, an interesting setting, or something in the writing (humor, enthralling detail, mystery, ect) can keep an introduction quite interesting without diving into the heart of a story.
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Old 06-22-2008, 10:19 AM   #3
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I read your prologue, and I'd say it was interesting enough to keep me going through one or two more chapters of none action, providing their is obvious progression of the story.

Although by 'not much action', I hope you don't mean an info dump. Something has to happen.
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Old 06-22-2008, 10:29 AM   #4
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Yeah stuff happens - its just not creature-orientated like the prologue was

Thanks for reading it BTW : )
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