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05-17-2008, 01:17 AM
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is – was. A question of grammar. No guessing aloud.
There’s this guy, see. He’s contemplating (present tense) how a particularly clever piece of artwork may have been (past tense) created. At this point you may envisage anything you wish, as I’m not describing it. The penny drops. He’s figured it out. Does he say “Aha! There is really only one way this could have been done” or “Aha! There was really only one way this could have been done”? Or doesn’t it matter? Why?
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05-17-2008, 01:27 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by The Backward OX
There’s this guy, see. He’s contemplating (present tense) how a particularly clever piece of artwork may have been (past tense) created. At this point you may envisage anything you wish, as I’m not describing it. The penny drops. He’s figured it out. Does he say “Aha! There is really only one way this could have been done” or “Aha! There was really only one way this could have been done”? Or doesn’t it matter? Why?
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Depends. If it's a unique process, then there is only one way. If it's a process that has since been superceded, then there was only one way, but there is now an alternative.
But really, unless you're reinforcing a point, you're probably splitting hairs.
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05-17-2008, 01:47 AM
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I agree. For your situation, either way is correct, I believe. English language rules are very fluid and always have been throughout its history (see "The Story of English" by Robert McCrum).
Even in Mike C's illustration, saying it both ways (is and was) means the same thing because of the clause in "could have been done".
It's a good example of how weird English is and why every rule seems to have multiple exceptions.
Last edited by astralis : 05-17-2008 at 01:49 AM.
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05-17-2008, 03:13 AM
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You're way overcomplicating this, both of you. There's a perfectly clear, simple, unambiguous, succinct and incontrovertibly accurate answer.
Observe:
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Originally Posted by The Backward OX
Does he say “Aha! There is really only one way this could have been done” or “Aha! There was really only one way this could have been done”?
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Yes.
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05-17-2008, 04:17 AM
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The third alternative
I suppose I could work around it by changing the setting to either two-three hundred years ago or Cornwall-Devon-Somerset today, and have my character say "Arr! There be really only one way, etc”.
just kidding.
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05-17-2008, 04:26 AM
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“Aha! There's really only one way this could have been done”
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05-17-2008, 04:43 AM
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Surely you meant "could of been done"
bok bok
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05-17-2008, 10:34 AM
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I think the moderator should ban posters from posting more than ten threads a week.
The limit should be around five a week, so there is no possibility of spam.
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05-17-2008, 11:13 AM
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Quote:
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is – was. A question of grammar. No guessing aloud.
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So it's not a problem if we guess silently?
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05-17-2008, 04:09 PM
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*scrolls rapidly thru recent posts by lin & Mike to see who riled TT enough for the blessed event to finally happen*
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05-17-2008, 04:41 PM
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I don't know Ox, but it could possibly have been a comment I made................
Probably not but go and see the thread Lin wrote about rules.......
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05-17-2008, 07:29 PM
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Thanks Joanna
I put the visit to good use.
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05-17-2008, 08:16 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by The Backward OX
There’s this guy, see. He’s contemplating (present tense) how a particularly clever piece of artwork may have been (past tense) created. At this point you may envisage anything you wish, as I’m not describing it. The penny drops. He’s figured it out. Does he say “Aha! There is really only one way this could have been done” or “Aha! There was really only one way this could have been done”? Or doesn’t it matter? Why?
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The tense inside the quote really doesn't matter, because dialog reflects the POV of the speaker, not necessarily that of the narrator. So, suit yourself! LOL
.....NaCl
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