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Old 11-19-2007, 08:00 PM   #31
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It can be done. In fact, I do it quite regularly. Take this from my story, Lord of Blood:
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It can work. You just have to make sure the rest of the sentence is complete. I may not be the best person to explain this, since I just do this. Ak me a question about what all the terms and logic behind it are, and I'll be stumped. If it 'looks right', then it usually is.
As has been pointed out several times in this thread, "Dodging" in this sentence is not a verb. What you have there is an adverb phrase.
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Old 11-21-2007, 01:55 PM   #32
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here in the U.s. i suck at grammar even in 11th grade haha
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