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01-31-2006, 05:43 PM
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Story help
Hi, I have a story that I am writing, and I need help. In the story, There are seven siblings, four male and three female. I am planning to add an eighth sibling that is a female. Should I do it? Why?
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01-31-2006, 06:01 PM
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lol, um, why not? If it fits the story then I don't think there would be any problem with doing so.
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01-31-2006, 06:18 PM
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Why are you asking? What do you think is the problem?
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01-31-2006, 06:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Sand
Why are you asking? What do you think is the problem?
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I thought it would not be a good idea to put in an eighth sibling. |
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01-31-2006, 08:12 PM
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That sounds like a lot of characters to me. We'd need to know a little more about the plot etc, and how the 8th sibling is going to fit in before we could answer that.
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02-01-2006, 04:41 PM
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why did you think it would not be a good thing?... and why did you want to add her in the first place?
no one can tell if it's a good idea or not, without knowing your reasons and what the character would be needed for [or not] in the story/plot...
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02-01-2006, 04:43 PM
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What's in my pocket? You answer that correctly and then I'll answer your question.
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02-01-2006, 07:35 PM
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A ring.
Ha Haaa!
or nothing.
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02-01-2006, 11:35 PM
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Heres a story, of a lovely lady....
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02-02-2006, 03:16 AM
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I'm sorry for being rude.
But what the heck is this question about?
It this a joke aye?
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