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Old 11-19-2005, 11:25 AM   #1
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Need help with my storyline.

Well, my story is a medieval fiction and is sort of confusing right now.

The main char. is a princess and her father is killed by a horosha later in the story. Horosha are the mages who have been banned for ill using their powers to the dungeons of maech, the forbidden city.

Now i've added to the intro and the Protagonist is talking to her friends, they are assassins but are also a bard and a juggler, and she is taking lessons from a man named cathal wwith her friend. the lessons teach them the arts of war and how to use weapons. But now she and her friend Alhana, her best friend, are together as Kailyn(The main char.) asked her to meet her but now i'm not sure where to go with the question.

Any help?
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Old 11-19-2005, 11:45 AM   #2
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well you could have it like a mistaken thing and the main character fights the protaganist and her freind but she realises she was wrong then they go out to stop/find her fathers killers

or

have on of the character (protagonist or her freind) killed by the main character resulting in another enemy.

just some ideas for you!
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Old 11-19-2005, 07:08 PM   #3
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You can check out my free tools at http://www.filmfiler.com/products.html to help you plan and develop your story.

I'm not entirely sure what question you refer to but it could be that you're not sure about plot or theme - you want to integrate them somehow into what happens throughout your story.

For info about plot see: http://www.filmfiler.com/2005/11/36-dramatic-plots.html

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