I find that there is a fine line between an intimate scene and a hardcore pornographic description. Stephen King seems to get away with it in most of his books, which i read with great interest during my growing pain years
. But i think the greatest mistake is start naming objects of the body unless its in a seductive sense, but nothing below the belt. So like you could put 'she shamelessly exposed her pert breasts' or something like that but going beyond that, first off using the anatomically correct term for a lower body part is boring and if you use the 'slang' preference for it you again are venturing into the x rated shelves at chapters...Do they actually have those? I've never ventured that far into the store
