Verago

lol. Thanks for the comment. The second one was more like a go-between chapter. I just set a few things up for later chapters.

Oh yeah... the fourth one is probably the best chapter I've done, but that's just my opinion.

Dan101

hehe, I was talking about the LOTR movies, but its all good. lol

Concerning your story: I like the first chapter a lot, becuase I like how you introduce Lex as sort of an arrogant stuck up knight, who is later saved by Heath. And I liked the fight scene between the demon and Heath, cus I thought it was clever how you had his arm dislocate in order to grab the sword. hehe

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Verago

Oops...sorry. Misunderstood...
Thanks, though.

suzakugaiden

Eh, really, I didn't like the second book much either. Not faulting the movies when it was the source materials fault :) Really, there were parts where I had no bloody clue what was going on because the constant landscape descriptions just made me lose my ability to pay attention.

Actually, movies usually handle jumps decently. Never thought I'd say this but watch more movies, kids!

(ohgodihatemyself)

Verago

Movies are a good thing...you can write a description of the movie you're watching to hone your writing skills.