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Hehehe, yes, he is cruel, but I'll also through in some other bits too, showing him caring for one of this sons for example... but at the same time totally ignoring another one of his sons (the older one) .
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Love it. I know this sounds corny, but it really shows how complex humans can be. Why love his sons but not that one? Why not marry Fay?
Why did Fay let him yank her chain? Your story sounds like its going to be good. I can't wait to read it.