A little enquirey - Writers Forum

Anonymous · 09-18-2003, 08:26 PM

I don't want to use any emotion to express any feeling that occurs to generally anyone. It is something that should not be so easily figured out. This feeling of the emotion is enough to wait for. The purist of its origin. Never surrendering to the falsities of life. Never asking or faulting back.

This is a little thing I wrote. Do you think this is writer material?
Thank you for all your thoughts.

Lily · 09-18-2003, 08:41 PM

Um . . . what is it supposed to be? A poem? A beginning of a short story? What you have here so far is certainly intriguing, but I'll need more if you want me to comment on it . . .

Darkshine · 09-18-2003, 09:30 PM

I think you're talking more abstract, philosophical writing there. I think it's a good start, but if you want to write like that, I would suggest working alot on being precise in your writing, it's hard stuff, trust me!