Thread: What is in a breath -

I breathe in the quiet between moments
where Light comes to stay.
The air stirs with the passing
of this silent way.
All is paused
and no disturbance will steal
here,
this is real.
I am filled with the joy and peace of loss,
of letting go.
I am one with a moment,
with what I cannot know.

I like this, very nice feel to it. I would suggest that you find an alternate word for one of these 'quiets', maybe silent?

I breathe in the quiet between moments
where light comes to stay.
The air stirs with the passing
of this quiet way.
All is paused
and no disturbance will steal
here,
this is real.
I am filled with the joy and peace of loss,
of letting go.
I am one with a moment,
with what I cannot know.

Thank you, silent is a good substitute for the second 'quiet' I think - will make the change as soon as I post this reply!

And just like that it becomes a better read. Very nice and a good choice of placement for that silent.