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    Writer Raptor980's Avatar
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    Old Lyre

    Old lyre just sit there,
    Like it has for 2000 years, collecting
    Dust with his spirit still playing.

    Lyre player, old spirit lyre player,
    Yes, I still hear you strumming to the beat,
    Really, I see the theater, filled up with people, and you tapping your feet,
    Elder lyre player, you're nothing more than a story, but I know better than most, I know you're more than a ghost.
    Last edited by Raptor980; 02-14-2012 at 03:10 AM.

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    Prolific Writer astroannie's Avatar
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    "more than a ghost" indeed. This is well-penned, it has an heirloom feel about it.
    There's nothing like a simile.

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