Thread: Planpalais after midnight (Adult Content)

1.


I remember


Your book beside your mattress
3 doors and no exit
Your patience
Scenes in hotel rooms


I remember


Blue jean baby in the launderette
Little girl lost in private hell
Learning through your silences
Your wish to be abandoned


2.


I need another shot of you
You seep into my skin like vodka
It takes all i've got to stop you
When you make love to me with your eyes


My heart dies again and I turn to rise
And turn my back to
The way you move, your fiery mind


I have something for you
But it stays in my hand and I walk away


I'm still horny and your no longer here
Maybe you still love me
But I can't get off on that


3.


It's been a few years now
I arrive at your door in what
I hope is a radiant light


You tell me to get lost
with a smile in your eyes
And as I am already lost
I hold your gaze
Until it burns my heart


Like before
We know the end from the start


We try to converse
Like old friends would
You remember bits of me
I remember all of you


I ask you how your feeling
And the same look covers your eyes
You say you felt me walk away
As soon as I arrived.


Later, when your eyes turned to new mistresses
And you freed yourself from my grip
I had no fight left in me
I had no fight left in me


Your more beautiful than a man should ever be
I come crashing come in an intense misery


4.
I saw you first, staring, hazy
through a room of strangers
Your eyes cut a path to mine
And we were introduced.


Where are you now
What happened to that place
The era of all of us
Lost in another new day

Thanks to whose who took the time to read my poems ! I think I should make a couple of them shorter...

hi Gisele
what do you mean by Planpalai?
beatifully written poem Gisele..it is feels very sincere and from the heart.
and very gentle too..

thank you so much nacian

Anyone else have any thoughts? By the way Plainpalais is an area near where I live

Gisele I liked this a lot. There were two places where you your instead of you're and normally I stop reading something when I see such a mistake but I couldn't stop reading this.
Mark.