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The reason I'm asking is because it has been requested of a story I have submitted; and I understand what I'm being told because without indents what is presented is a wall of words.
Just have a look at the first post of "New - Displaced, part 1." I submitted in the Writers Workshop forum, I think you'll see the problem.
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Stuff I've posted in the past is still worthy of being critiqued. Please check it out and have your say. I will return the favour.
Last edited by Richie.S : 12-05-2007 at 06:42 PM.
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