achilles... i see this is your first post... just take time to look around and you'll see that members often seek writing partners in the various subject areas... all you have to do is post a request in the appropriate forum and you'll find those who're open to co-writing, or reciprocal personal critiques, or whatever it is you have in mind...
btw, it's a forum preference [if not outright rule] that new members introduce themselves before posting or making suggestions for changes... as you have only this one post showing, you may want to go do that now... it's the section just above this one, in the list...
welcome to the forums! [in advance]
love and hugs, maia