whats wrong with this? - Writers Forum

acetronic · 07-22-2004, 03:54 PM

I Ove You, China!( or your country's name)
i love you, china!
i think i dont make such mistake.

alphadog · 07-22-2004, 04:50 PM

It should read
"I love you, China!"

You can place the (or your country's name) inside of the thread as the first line before your poem begins...
I think that they want the subject line to include only the name of the poem.

Spudley · 07-22-2004, 05:10 PM

Nothing wrong with it that I can see. In fact, I was about to comment on the poem itself and say I liked it.

Some of your other poems have caused problems with the forum rules (as you know), but that particular one is fine -- in fact, it's a very good piece of poetry.

alphadog - the point about just including the poem name is only really intended to stop people having subject titles like "my poem - please critique". This one really isn't a problem