nacreous

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Kaleef wyyyyyyyyyyyyyyysick.

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“Take uuuuuuuuuuuu

phurst

Well, I read it, 2 different stories. Not sure the bridge from one to the other worked. I likes the 2nd part better. The first felt incomplete and not descriptive enough and the fighting kids in school and then he is up late because of his parents fighting. I didn't see whee it had much or anything to do with the whole thing. Maybe I just need more info.

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nacreous

ok, waahhhhhhhhh!

“But what of wings.”

And
“Ho de doh!” ccccccccccccccch

Monkuta

Well, that was certainly interesting. It definitely had a moral, though I think you may have made it a bit too obvious. Also, the last sentence doesn't have an end. Overall, you did a good job, but I'm not too fond of it.

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Monkuta's Favorite Quotes: "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its' pupils." - Louis Hector Berlioz; "Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings." - Anonymous; "The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on." - Robert Bloch; "Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway." - Anonymous

nacreous

yeah, you right. thats kinda how I feel about it, too. good instincts, there