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03-10-2008, 06:06 PM
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Shows what I know.
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03-10-2008, 06:10 PM
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Location: Texas
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O.o
Ooook...
Tiamat, don't be distrubed by this but I just went to the bathroom and was thinking about your peice and I realized - Just how brilliant it really is! Sorry...sometimes I get after thoughts >.> I think it was perfect. Are you going to add to it? Cause I like how *forgot name at the momet* put it. It's like we were in...then we were out. A glimpse. Perfect. I don't see much of that.
Ok I am done kissing @$ $ 
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Warning: Contains mass amounts of cheese.
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03-10-2008, 06:13 PM
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0.o
oookkkk...
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03-10-2008, 06:19 PM
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Hahaha thanks truth...I knew I was going to get that >.<
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03-10-2008, 06:21 PM
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Location: Western PA. Again.
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O.o
Sorry, just didn't want to be left out of that little game there. Lol.
Jax, I don't think I'm going to add to it. The only thing that I considered doing with that was to...how to explain it? Erm, make a sort of compilation thing of everyday experiences of various different people that end up all being connected...uh...somehow. Yeah, that doesn't really make any sense. I have no idea how to explain that one. :/
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03-10-2008, 06:47 PM
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Good. I like it the way it is.
But I kinda get what you are trying to say, and I like that idea. Very unique. Sounds sorta hard to do but I have no doubt you could pull that off.
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BTW, I should have somthing to crtitique for you tonight, is that ok? Here it is perfect weather to just cuddle up in a blanket and WRITE.
Just wish I had internet in my apartment >.<
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03-10-2008, 07:22 PM
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Yeah, that's fine. Wonderful, even. I have absolutely nothing to do. It's sad, really...
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