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Old 03-05-2008, 12:55 AM   #1
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Houseboat Inland.

We were sitting on some rocks, about five or six of us, watching Yo La Tengo. They were playing a show out on the water, from a boat. The beach was packed. A girl wearing an orange creamsicle bathing suit came up to me and asked me if I was who I said I was. I said that I was, and she took my hand and we navigated the beach to where she was sitting. We watched Yo La Tengo and I held her tit outside of her bathing suit. Her skin was really white, and I could imagine the colour of her pubes. Sandy.
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:12 AM   #2
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geez. what's the point? posting something like this is worthless and appeals only to prurient interests. It wouldn't be as offensive if included as a meaningful part of larger piece of art with purpose behind it, but as it is, it seems just to be passing fantasy. At least the writing is clear.
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:21 AM   #3
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I'm guessing this is a joke.
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Old 03-08-2008, 03:53 PM   #4
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No...it's not a joke.

Also, how is it offensive?

Just wondering.

Thanks.
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Old 03-08-2008, 04:00 PM   #5
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This should be called "Yo no tengo nada."
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Old 03-08-2008, 04:19 PM   #6
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houseboat inland is a way better title. houseboat island is also pretty good.
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Old 03-08-2008, 04:22 PM   #7
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but what if she were shaved...then the whole question of the color of her pubes is mute.
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