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Old 03-04-2008, 06:19 PM   #31
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People in this thread who are getting all serious now just look like idiots.

It was silly, funny and to the point. Perhaps the funniest part of it is how it manages to sort out the forum users into those who do and do not need to loosen up.
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Old 03-04-2008, 07:08 PM   #32
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Wait, wait... that story had a point?
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Old 03-05-2008, 01:23 AM   #33
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point? funny thing about simplistic passages, is that you can over-complicate them, which is always fun. I mean you can turn the dumbest crap into something worth a cent or two. ex.: The grandfather's naive, ignorant, and clueless nature mirrors Little Frankie's, showing how the young and old are alike, and giving an open interpretation of natures cycle of life. Sexual discovery is presented as a vehicle to drive forward the larva stage (Frankie), into the fully developed butterfly (grandpa). Little Frankie never getting a straight forward or decent answer shows life's way of self-discovery, even into old age (Grandpa still doesn't know everything). In a way it proves how life always tempts humans to answer its questions, never really giving it to them. Even by old age you don't have enough time to answer it. Eventually your soul is reborn, and thus life makes you discover it once again. Life, therefore cannot be answered. The meaning of life is not to answer what life is, but simply to live it and discover yourself.

There, this short story just proved the meaning of life.

see what I mean?
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Old 03-05-2008, 01:24 AM   #34
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would someone explain to me how this is funny?
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Old 03-05-2008, 01:25 AM   #35
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or anything?

it's a poorly, poorly written waste of time. I don't need to "loosen up"
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Old 03-05-2008, 08:07 AM   #36
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I like how almost everyone doesn't like this story, yet it has the most views.
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Old 03-05-2008, 02:32 PM   #37
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I like how almost everyone doesn't like this story, yet it has the most views.
Doesn't mean anything.
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Old 03-06-2008, 02:16 PM   #38
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It had the potential to hold something memorable. But i think it was all in the wrong order. A child asking straight out what oral sex is, just isn't believable. These types of dialogues (sp) are only funny when it's possible that a conversation like this could take place. The innocence of a child and the old fashioned views of an old man(stereotypically) make a great setting for a hillarious talk about the birds and the bees.

As for some of insults thrown between people replying, that's funny on it's own and really just not neccessary
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