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Old 02-18-2008, 05:34 PM   #1
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a picture can tell a thousand words, that dosen't make it any good. - If you should see me doing an epelsis (The "..." thing). I'm quoting that, I should suppose....
Oh, and damn my fear of plagarising something! Very irrational it is....
Last edited by impactblade : 11-22-2008 at 12:35 PM. Reason: With my recent plagarism fears, I've taken to stupidly deleting everything I've written. Yay! Silly yes. Very silly.
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Old 02-20-2008, 09:06 AM   #2
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it was pretty good, one problem i had was A'kin's name. Maybe its just me but every time i read the name, my eyes skipped the A and i just read kin. otherwise it was pretty good.
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I agree it was very hard to read that name. Overall, the scene was interesting, and if you know there are grammar mistakes already I won't go there.
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