Glad Allen

"flip-flop, flip-flop", the sounds of my sandals against the cold hard concrete floor echoe in amusement, like a ticking clock stolen from the hands of time.
fuck.
I'm at it again, talking to myself as if I were slightly influenced by a higher power of schitzophrenia.
I dont fucking have it.
I dont give a flying fuck what they say...

This is what I call Chapter 1, the part of my life where two corresponding triangles hardly correspond at all. In fact, the triangles dont even exist.


Note: Im working on developing a bunch of movie ideas, so most of the things I'll be posting are short segments such as this, let me know what you think. The character in this is extremely self involved and easily amused, thers more to the character, what do you guys see in him? or her?

Azmakna

there isn't enough there to form any views on characterization

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Glad Allen

Yeah, I guess I can see that.
I must have the character built in my head already, but by reading that do you get the sense of paranoia or a pessimistic or cynical vibe?

Azmakna

apart from that, not really. this is cheating in a way though. expand it a little and i'll have another look... okay

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