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Old 06-27-2007, 01:14 PM   #1
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Sands of Time

“My friends are the most important…do you know why?” LJ asked Coss who was standing at his side. It was quiet and the sky was cloudy. “Why is that?” Coss asked him sitting down. “Because you won’t ever find the same person more than once in your whole entire life, I have been here since you made me but never once have I found more than one person who was the same.”

The ground was destroyed and there was some people standing in front of LJ. Katherine who was one of LJ’s ex girlfriends, Jordan who was another ex, Wendy who was LJ’s ex but Togoten’s loved one, Joanna who was a close friend, and some others. Next to LJ were his circle of friends that he would go to any length to keep around they were Nate; his best friend and the prince of hell, Togoten; the dark god, and Julius; his brother. The earth had seen the apocalypse and LJ was the one who had saved a good amount of people. God was going to remake the human race alongside Spike. “When do you want to get started?” LJ asked standing. The group of friends stood there watching. “Where is Courtney?” LJ asked Julius who was brandishing his blade. “She is Back in Heaven making all the preps.”

“Then let’s begin.”

LJ’s close circle placed their hands on the ground and used their Alchemy; they were the only ones who knew how to use it. Each person fell dead but rose to be an Angel. Their bodies had been sacrificed to remake the human race. People started appearing left and right and then the Angels had gone to Heaven. “Welcome to paradise and please make this place your home. You are all lucky that I have given you another chance to exist, Coss here will prepare you for anything.”

Kat and Joanna stood there poking each other’s wings. “They are so cute!” Kat said with a smile on her face. LJ smiled back at her then he walked to the palace with Nate and Togoten. “Do you think that was a good idea?” Togoten asked. “Get Elye and Courtney they should be done making the crystals,” LJ told Nate. He nodded and then he ran to the lab part of the palace. LJ turned to Togoten. “Look at them. You love Wendy do you not?” He asked Togoten who was still looking at the group of new Angels. “Yeah I do but that doesn’t explain why you had done that. They are going to be alive until eternity now. Is that a good thing?” Togoten asked touching his dark demonic wings. “Yes it is. Tell me if you are going to forget Wendy. Will she be just a memory or do you want her to be there forever? A picture in your mind is one thing but having something there until the end of time as you knew it is better. Don’t get me wrong I don’t know if it was a good idea to turn them into an Angel but I don’t want to forget them in the sands of time.”
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