hazel_baby

I don't know if someone is bored enough to be willing to do this. heh. It's missing the actual intercourse scene, etc etc..I don't know how to write it. So I'm looking for some help- which includes any critique or aid.

As your family pulls into town, you can feel your pussy getting wetter from the thoughts running through your head. You get to the resort soon afterwards, and begin to unpack, prepping for the week ahead. After unpacking, you ask your parents when they are leaving. They tell you that they are going to the river in about half an hour, so you go get changed into your bathing suit so they think that you will be going with them. When the time comes for you all to leave, you say that your stomach is hurting and you’re going to stay there for a bit, and tell them to go ahead without you. Shortly after they leave, you call me up and tell me where you are staying, and to get there fast. I pull up soon after and I quickly find your room and I knock anxiously. I hear you run to the door, and you open it. You say “hi” immediately, yet shyly. I say “hi” back, and ask, “What’s up?”

You quickly reply, “oh nothing, just you!” as you notice the bulge in my pants. Giving me a wink, you tell me to come in and have a seat. You turn around and start to sexily walk back to where you were seated. I pinch your lovely ass as you turn around and you squeal a little bit as you look over your shoulder giving me the “come get it” look. I follow you in, closing and locking the door behind me. As you walk back to the couch, I study you up and down, your tight blue jeans accentuating your perfect butt and legs, and your tight red tank top, showing off your curves and the lining of your bra. Your hair is put back into a ponytail, and I notice the sensual aroma of your perfume. You turn around and sit down on the couch, pulling your legs up under you. I sit down next to you, and I stare at your beauty. You notice my stares and you stare back. I scoot closer to you on the couch until I am right next to you, moving in for a quick kiss.

I connect with your lips, and you kiss back, pulling away after a second. I lean in for another one, connecting again, your mouth partially open. You slide your tongue into my mouth, and I slide mine into yours, caressing your tongue and enjoying the feeling. We continue making out as I grab your ass and pull you on top of me, one leg on each side.

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