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06-23-2007, 09:27 AM
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Yeee....
I don't know what to say.. I like the whole idea of this short story, but I myself don't know what sex is like. But... but.. hell, I can imagine it just as you did. Even thou there was not much relating here it, you know, made the whole story understanding cause you were taking a shot at sex, not telling me about experience you had.. I hope..
Annnnd, you did a nice job, cause in the end I used common sense... something I don't do often
*jumps off a bridge*
Annnnd because my imagining skills are so vivid... hehehehe... I got a picture I might have nightmares over!!
Im pretty sure if you connected female and male, there won't me as much trouble as Shawn stated...
Good job, Voodoo.
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Last edited by Diverse : 06-23-2007 at 09:33 AM.
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06-23-2007, 09:37 AM
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Thank you, as always, Diverse. But I do have an obvious trouble connecting male and female...
Your post was very descriptive.
...and, I'm a never been kissed virgin myself.
Last edited by Voodoo : 06-23-2007 at 09:40 AM.
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06-23-2007, 09:43 AM
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No prob.
See, myself, sometimes I do sex stories as well. But with me, I've been with this little group that my friend made for a long time and I'm not THAT experienced with expressing sex, but it's not that hard for me to do so. And I've read fan fiction on sex and whatnot. It increases my image of sex, which everyone needs.
It takes some effort to create it in a positive manner. You may ask yourself: What would I do? How would I feel? It helps a lot! Then comes the... bed.. and.. 
 It jsut takes time, how about that, hehehe...
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06-23-2007, 09:47 AM
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Thats a great education, sex. But I was aiming for more than that.
Sex refined, if you will.
That may be a good thing to put into a sig, huh?
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06-23-2007, 09:54 AM
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Hehe, yeah, after you slam your head into a wall then explain what you mean by that..
*looks over to the young kids*
Yikes..
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06-23-2007, 10:02 AM
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Ah, the real feat will be telling what sex is really like, but also explaining how it feels. Thats a well I fear I may not be able to tap.
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