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Old 06-20-2007, 11:10 PM   #1
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Blood Thirsty

Julius got up off the table. Many cords and wires deep into his arms and Stomach. He could only see bodies strewn around the room. "Doctors?" He asked himself looking at the room. No they were something more; they had wings. He could feel something powerful above the room. "Who am I and why am I here in this place?" Julius asks himself once more but this time in confusion. He went to the breach and seen a village among the hills. He walked very slowly to the town. Planes and tanks passed around him. Troops stopped and pointed their guns straight at Julius. He gave them a long look and then they all started to run. He got to the village and then collapsed on the cobble road. "please get me some medicine," A doctor yelled but that was all Julius remembered.

He had a dream of many things that he never really had done or seen. There was a girl named Jordan and a boy named LJ but nothing he really knew. One dream shown him LJ and Jordan separating and going down two different paths. There was another one showing LJ meeting someone new; she had brown hair and very cool looking brown eyes. He opened his eyes and could feel his power deep inside him; it was gone. "Jordan...Kat....Joanna....who were they?" He asked himself then there was a thought in Julius's head. "Jordan was his wife....Kat must have been an Ex and then there is Joanna....who could she be. I can feel that he wanted her to be more but then there is something that is stopping him....My brother is weak minded."

"I see that you are up," A nurse said handing him a cup of water. He pulled himself up and then stared at her. He listened to the nurse talk to the doctor. "This boy....he really gives me the creeps. An uneasy feeling," She whispered to him. The doctor agreed and then he walked out the room. Julius decided he wasn't going to deal with it and then he got up; pulling out the wires from his body. The nurse came in and then he grabbed her by her neck and covered her mouth. "So do you really think that I am creepy?" He asked her looking in her eyes. She nodded and then he bit her neck open spilling the blood everywhere. He threw her down and she gargled in her own blood until she had died.

"Measly human. How am I to find LJ?" He whispered thinking about the place and time. His power rose higher and then he spit out some of the blood that was left in his mouth. "Well since I have been through history I think this world needs a new torment. I have been a mercenary, red coat, Marine, soldier after soldier," Julius said killing a German soldier and then took his clothes which fit his body. "A dark era will welcome a dark soul.."
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