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Old 06-20-2007, 09:06 PM   #1
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We had an english assinment to write about our pet. Ofcourse the pet had to get lost form you and find itself in a completly unknown enviroment. The story needed details about your pet, the things they enjoy, info about them, ect. so i wrote about my kitty Reese.....


“Let’s go mom. We need those craft supplies” I said as we hopped into our van. I climbed in and buckled up; half way there I swear I heard a meow… However I ignored that. We arrived and I hoped out however I forgot to shut the door…

Out of our van popped little Reese with an excited look in her eye. Never before had she been out of the house. She walked around in the parking lot until a big thundering monster almost crashed into her and it blared its thundering roar. BEEEEEP!!!!!!! Terror struck the poor cat and she made a Bee line for the door of the craft store. However the man walking in did not see her in time and kicked her side.
The by now petrified kitty bolted for the now nearest flight of steps. The basement…
Down in the basement it was as black as, well… … black. Poor little Reese, the terrified kitty ran and ran for what she felt was an eternity. She ran, that is until CRASH! The poor cat crashed into a box and low and be hold what should be in that box but PIPE CLEANERS!!! They fell all over her, and she back away quickly then turned around and hissed an angry warning. Her eyes sharp and keen to any movement and then from on top of the stack, one little pipe cleaner fell down the pile and POW! Reese pounced!
The battle lasted for what may have been a whole day, or at least well into the night. And after every last pipe cleaner warrior had fallen Reese had a feast. Finally she settled down on a flat metal surface to sleep and just as she went to sleep there came an extremely loud whirring sound and the metal began to vibrate! Reese meowed in horror and leaped off of the platform and again began to dash around in the dark until once again BANG!
She hit, yet another box… slowly the box tipped over the reveal its deadly payload of… POM POMS!! The now absolutely horror-struck Reese attempted to navigate herself out of there in time; however she was not so lucky… The poor cat was piled under thousands of pom poms. She thrashed about until she was free and ran as fast as her legs could move away from there.
Tired, hungry and scared Reese huddled near the door. She wished she hadn’t ever left the house with us, She wished she had stayed in the car, She wished she had a nice warm place to sleep. Just then, little Reese saw a light in the dark. Curiosity took over and she headed away from the stairs and toward the light.
It was a door, but as Reese looked inside she could see nothing. She walked further along and then her most little kitty noise perked up. She smelled what had to have been the most delicious smell ever.
She came to another door and pushed it open with her head, she then meowed a gasp. Inside the other room was an entire freezer full of fish! Never before had Reese seen so much or so many kinds of fish! Best of all nobody was around to tell her no! Reese gave in and dove into the piles of fish. Tuna, Flounder, Carp, Salmon, and multitudes of fish she couldn’t even name! She even found the exhaust room where it was nice and warm.
Several hours later a fat looking Reese lay in the exhaust room. She licked her paws as if to say “ah, what a meal…” Just then she heard a sound. Something of a scuff, it was quick and sharp, and then it was gone. A few minutes later she heard it again, closer… and then yet again closer…
Reese started to freak out, something leaned into the door. A tall dark shadow… Reese looked up and meowed in terror…




Well? What did ya'll think?
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Old 06-22-2007, 10:57 PM   #2
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Aww, poor kitty! Nice story why hasn't someone else already posted in this?!

I really enjoyed this, plenty of action and jokes to keep me interested in it. Nothing really to complain about except a few little grammar errors, nothing a a proof read couldn't clear up.
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