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Old 06-18-2007, 08:38 PM   #1
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Old 06-19-2007, 04:39 PM   #2
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This one is very odd, but I truly liked it. I think it is great. I do not have any clever critique because I don't think it needs one. A damn good story!
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Nice! I agree its very odd. And I also agree that its too good to be scrutenised by anyone other than a seasoned professional. I like the idea and the way you have shown and told us about this dirty corner of the world and the life of a single person trapped within it.
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Old 06-20-2007, 08:50 AM   #4
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i really liked it!
i didnt see anything wrong in regards to spelling or grammar.
i liked the way that he felt he could control the stars in the canal and nothing else in his life.
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