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I really enjoyed thisand would love to read the next part. The times spent in the tree house, and everything to do with the tree house, is just so wonderful to the two main characters that I feel like I'm waiting for something bad to happen.
Reminds me of this time we had a huge two storey tree house thingwith all furniture and everything. Someone burnedit down :'( Took many fire fighters to put it out.
Nice start anyway. I think you've had all the critique you need. Let me know when the next part is posted.
Rachiesmif
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