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Old 05-03-2007, 11:59 PM   #1
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A Killers Agenda

If this makes no sense sorry. I done this in class when I was bored. If its good there will be more added later.
There once was a man named LJ. He was a mass murderer. He had killed thousands of people. Men, Women, and kids they were all the same. He was only 16 but he was able to kill just about anyone. His favorite object to use was a knife that had been in his family for generations. It was silver and had a brown handle which gripped his hand very well.

When he first decided to kill he was only 10 years old but he had the mind of a 40 year old psychopath. He was walking down a small road that was deserted. The time was about noon. He was due to get home in a few minutes but he was usually a few minutes late every other day. LJ was thinking about doing something that he had only dreamed about and read. There was a boy walking up past him; the same age. LJ felt his pocket on his pants to check for the knife. It was there. He grabbed the older boy and jammed the blade into neck. Blood poured down the poor boys shirt. His eyes were watering and fixed on LJ. He fell slowly and could see LJ just smiling. A grim smile it was. LJ walked away. There was no struggle, no contact just the low sounds of a boy trying to breath. LJ didn’t get any blood on him so no one would have suspected him. LJ slept as he always did. No remorse or sadness. Early in the morning he woke up and got ready for school. He was in the 6th grade so he placed the knife in a secret pocket inside the backpack. Once in school he set out to use the bathroom. There was the janitor in there. He had brought his knife with him. When the man looked up he slit his throat. It was clean and simple. He walked out. The time he spent in the bathroom was only 2 or 3 minutes; too short for a normal killer. He had heard the cops were now looking for the suspect and he was always there at the scene of the crimes. Would they suspect him or was he just over reacting? Lj was sent home finally. School kids walked around him. The urge to kill was getting stronger but he too was learning how to suppress it for a longer time.

On his 11th birthday he chose another random person he has seen on the street. He brandished his blade before so he wouldn’t have a hard time. The person he chose was a girl with red hair. She had been walking around all morning so her parents would not know she was missing. Again she was older then he was by at least 5 years. This did not matter to him though he was going to kill her any way. He had hid in the bushes and waited. When she was right next to him he lunged. He was getting faster now so he was able to cut her throat and vanish in a matter of mere moments. People had no clue that LJ had done it. LJ was one boy in the crowd. Everyone there was scrambling around to find out who done it but among them was the real person. He went back home and waited for his mom. She had gone out for the cake two minutes earlier. LJ was only gone for at least 3 minutes prior to the killings. His mom came home and she didn’t know what had happened. He was getting away with murder again. Over the years he had traveled farther and yet killed more and more. The cops could find out where the murders’ epicenter was since the killings were random.
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