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Short Stories Short Stories, usually between 500 and 2000 words.

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Old 09-16-2006, 04:22 PM   #16
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ok, well that was interesting, but not really all that life changing, not really as intimate as the first was written by Peter Flemming...but close enough
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Cause sometimes you just feel tired.
You feel weak and when you feel weak you feel like you wanna just give up.
But you gotta search within you, you gotta find that inner strength
and just pull that shit out of you and get that motivation to not give up
and not be a quitter, no matter how bad you wanna just fall flat on your face and collapse.
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Old 09-16-2006, 04:24 PM   #17
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And ironic unexpected ending???wtf, this was bland, it had no taste, andfirst:rich ppl dont drink cola, they dont get thirsty leering,and definitely wouldn't want to be in the rain, they'd be in their indoor pool
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Cause sometimes you just feel tired.
You feel weak and when you feel weak you feel like you wanna just give up.
But you gotta search within you, you gotta find that inner strength
and just pull that shit out of you and get that motivation to not give up
and not be a quitter, no matter how bad you wanna just fall flat on your face and collapse.
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