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Old 07-25-2006, 06:40 PM   #1
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First Chapter of My Novel
Here is the first chapter of my novel. I can't decide on a name but presently I'm calling it "Blood Ghost Haunted". However, it is not just a novel about a ghost.

Anyway, I'm attempting to make each chapter like a short story but a story that leads into the next chapter. I welcome any advice so cut it to pieces.

Blood Ghost Haunted Chapter One
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Old 07-26-2006, 07:36 AM   #2
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Sorry but I didn't read this. I'm posting to let you know that you should probably post this again in the Critique & Adivice thread. And also try and post the whole thing, not a link.
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