Surfing Coffee

Johnny had a bottled beer and Melanie had a vodka cranberry. Tom tended bar and flirted with Mandy, who was leaning into the wet counter, her breasts splayed out over the rum and vodka pond. Jennifer had no reservations about constantly, every forty five seconds, grazing her bare arm into Amanda's freckled, also bare arm. [To be continued]

Sigg

I honestly don't know what you hoped to accomplish or were expecting by posting this. You've just introduced 6 characters in 3 short sentences and have absolutely no description of them or the setting or of anything for that matter. The idea behind this forum is that you write the story first, then post it. Please write more and repost.

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