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Old 01-02-2006, 08:00 PM   #1
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The Catalyst (Please Critique!)

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Old 01-02-2006, 08:09 PM   #2
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Please don't beg for critiques. I beg you not to. This is a writing forum. I may take a look at it, but I'm not promising you anything.

In the meantime I beg you to critique some writing around here also.
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Old 01-02-2006, 09:23 PM   #3
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Please don't beg for critiques. I beg you not to. This is a writing forum. I may take a look at it, but I'm not promising you anything.

In the meantime I beg you to critique some writing around here also.
I dont think asking for readers to critque is really begging as you so put it but I'm new to this site so I just thought i'd put it in. Didn't think i'd have to be shunned for something so simple. If I wanted to beg i'd post in every section on this site but I won't.

I do see your point though and will try to follow the rules.
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Old 01-02-2006, 09:28 PM   #4
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if you're planning on turning it into a novel, put it in Writer's Workshop. a company wouldn't appreciate your work being open for public view before it was published.
post it in writer's workshop and i'll critique it for you buddy
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Old 01-02-2006, 10:27 PM   #5
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Thanks for the tip. I'll do that right away.
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Old 01-02-2006, 11:03 PM   #6
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don't forget to erase this piece- just edit it, and take all the text out. haha.
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