Have to disagree with gohn on this one. There is a lot here.
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The loneliness I know he must feel is converted in my subconscious to a lie of a self-sufficiency act. But I know I can survive on my own.
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This is the only sentence I didn't love. Decent thought, I guess, but contradictory, redundant and and angsty tell/anaylsis of personal feelings.
The rest is great IMHO. Interesting. Educational. Strong finish, no need to expound. The jump from 1st to 2nd person in the last sentence works a treat.
Great flash. Borderline poetry.
upholds=holds
