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Old 12-15-2005, 12:46 AM   #1
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So it all started three years ago. I was just eighteen years old, and loved computers. I had just gotten pulled away from my sports life to computers then, so if you looked at me, you probably couldn’t tell that I spent my whole life at home on the computer, but that was the truth. At that time I was applying to go to MIT, where I would major in Computer Science and come out as a programmer.

The Internet is a fine place all right, thank Tim Berners-Lee for that, and I used to roam about it all the time. I had membership to many forums, and I enjoyed a community of people on the internet that I didn’t have at school. Yes, I know it was sad; I didn’t have any friends. The internet brought me all around the world without leaving my desk, and I wanted to explore it all. Eventually, I decided to look for acceptable collages to go to, so began to look. That was when I came across MIT.

That day was a Saturday, and my parents were out. At this time, I was at the computer every Saturday, and decided to go to visit MIT’s website. One final glimpse and I went back to Google, to look for a rating of colleges that I saw at the library called the Princeton Review. There was a link that looked like it would go to that website, but it wasn’t.

For the first time in my life, my Pop-Up blocker failed me. I was drilled with boxes multiplying and stacking on top of each, and looking at the start bar, there were so many little ‘E’ symbols that there were little scrollbars. They just kept on coming. Of course I was calm then; I had no idea what I was in for, so I did my usual thing, and pressed Control-Alt-Delete and selected Task Manager.

There was that familiar box, with my favorite button ever: “End Task”. Using my amazing Shift Select skills, I highlighted all of the pop-ups, and pressed End Task. I knew that this was the best part, seeing all of them go away, so I laughed, and continued. They disappeared, but more kept coming.

That was when I had my next idea. My next favorite part of the Task Manager was the Processes tab. There was a long list of all the running processes on my computer. I clicked the Name column, to sort that way and found IEXPLORE.EXE and hit my second favorite button, “End Process”. Up came an error box, saying “Are you sure you want to terminate the process?” Of course I wanted to! So I clicked yes.

“Error: Cannot close program. If it is being debugged, please close the debugger.”

What? How could this happen? It’s not being debugged! I hit the delete and enter keys on my keyboard as hard as I could, but it didn’t fix the problem. The next solution was rebooting. I hated rebooting, since it took a long time for my Windows 2K machine to start up, especially with its slow processor, but in this case, it was necessary.

I logged in when the screen came back, but to my surprise, my favorite blue background was gone. Instead, there was a white background, which looked horrible, since the captions to the icons were still blue. The hourglass flipped, and suddenly the white screen loaded, and it loaded into another hateful error message:

“Error: Your computer has spyware. Download the latest spyware removal software here.”

I knew this was fake. Windows would not change the background of your desktop to tell you to download spyware removal software at a certain URL. Something was wrong. I right clicked on the background, and went to properties, like I always did, but instead of it giving me a preview of the “None” background, it had an internet image properties box, with the URL: C:\WINNT\warnhlp.jpg.

No, I thought. The virus has gotten into my computer. Immediately, I downloaded the latest free software, and ran as many as I could to get rid of viruses. Eventually, I found out how to get rid of the screen, and it never came back, but the problem was worse than that.
Suddenly, my computer logged out.

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It tore through me that day, watching as I logged back in all of my files be deleted and important files from my operating system somehow deleted with out “Access denied” errors coming, and I felt sick. What kind of idiot has fun with this kind of stuff, killing other peoples’ computers and making them mad? I just wanted to kill that guy.

Finally, when I got a new computer, I learned about programming. I downloaded a bunch of free programming environments from Microsoft’s MSDN and began learning. I learned Visual Basic, C-Sharp (C#), Microsoft’s Version of Java (J#), and wrote programs.

One day, I came upon an idea. I opened that webpage I had gone to a month earlier in a Web Development Environment, and learned about HTML. I saw all of that code that opened the pop-ups. For destroying my computer, I wanted to get back at the guy who made it, so I did a search of his program and found him on a Web forum somewhere and traced his IP address. Oh yeah, I was mad, and I sent him the virus he sent me.
Sending that to him made me feel happy inside, something weird that I shouldn’t feel, but I sure felt it. So this was what he felt when he sent it to me? That was when I got into hacking. I wrote spyware and viruses like crazy. For fun! I found people’s credit card numbers and bank account numbers, and even social security numbers, but I didn’t need them, since it was just like a challenge. I felt satisfied with my efforts, proud for my hard work. But it was a bad thing I did.

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I have to say, that one guy made an impact on my life. It was very interesting to see the FBI search my dorm room and come out with my computer, and book me brutally. That one guy who’s still safe because he didn’t go crazy with what he did. Like I did? I didn’t go crazy with it? Then how did they find me? It must have been that, and I guess that here I still feel satisfied with what I did.
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Old 12-17-2005, 12:06 AM   #2
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Hey EhraniNavy,
Interesting story. It's really hard to write a story about someone using a computer. You did a decent job with it. Very straight forward style. The turning point of the story is when he gets hooked on viruses and spyware. That seems to be the more interesting part. Tough to write.
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Old 12-21-2005, 12:46 PM   #3
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The student sat alone in the room, at the corner desk. It was a room filled with many of these desks, not ordinary ones, but slate topped ones. Three roughly triangular shaped sinks were in a triangular pattern in the room. A double whiteboard behind a teacher’s desk, an elevated slate desk with a piece of wood backing, and a row of windows towards the east made the room the way it was.

In front of the student was a set of beakers, filled with bubbling chemicals. Food coloring was in a box to his right. Everything was set. He knew what he had to do, and that was simple enough; pouring each beaker into the next in succession. It was a rather fun lab to watch from an audience, and that was what he planned to do.
As he was thinking it, it became real, and the room faded away. He was sitting at a slate desk, with the beakers upon it, on a black stage. The entire school had gathered in the audience of the theater to watch him. It was a nerve-wracking situation, and the student had some difficulty acclimating to this.

It was set, like he had thought before, and began to run through the process. Each beaker turned into another created a strong acid-like chemical that bubbled and steamed, and even changed colors according to the way the food coloring mixed together. Before the last chemical, he stopped, and made the biggest mistake he could have.

He stood up, and the audience cheered, but that was not the mistake. He shouldn’t have taken off his goggles. No one there knew why anyone would do such a thing, but somehow, the student decided to take a risk and do it. But there was no restraint. The crowd was roaring for the explosion they knew was going to happen.

Of course the student knew the explosion would happen, and had built a metal shield on the floor, and seeing this caused the student to find more realization in his sudden fade away into the theater. First, he set the beaker with the last chemical inside the shield, and then came back to the table. Dreadfully, he took the last beaker, somehow become instantly shaky, and he watched the fizzing orange liquid shaking and creating waves.

Again, something happened, and the world slowed down for him. The beaker did not go into the shield, but somewhere else. This was part of the will of the beaker, and he let it be. The student moved in realtime, and the liquid moved in slow motion. He watched the liquid moving out of the beaker towards him, but he did not do anything, did not show any fear. He simply laughed.

It was a laugh of disbelief, and that disbelief cost him. Things switched. The world became realtime, and he moved in slow motion. The beaker shattered, and more liquid flew up towards his face, towards his eyes. His confidence and sure attitude simply flew out the window, and desperation and a distressed attitude replaced them respectively. He knew, and lifted his hands up towards his eyes. But it was all a matter of seconds. The liquid was moving incredibly fast, streaming with a sonic boom towards him, and his hands, they seemed like creaky windshield wipers, struggling to clear the windshield in sleet.

Too late. The liquid entered his eyes before his hands could stop it, and that was it. The student saw everything before him, the now shrieking crowd, and then he didn’t. It went in. And it burned.

Then there was pain, a torment of no other, tearing apart his mind. He uttered a wrenching scream, tearing the minds out of the audience. The hall was silent, and his pain echoed throughout. Some of the audience cringed.

The scream echoed, again and again, as he continued, yelling like a madman about his eyes in an unknown language so foreign that it seemed similar. Inside him, the student felt like he was being burned on an oven that he was taped down to and all of this in his eyes. There was nothing, even as he opened them, and the tears streamed liquid out. But it was not enough.

Throughout the ordeal, he was like a prisoner of a medieval war, in a torture hall, being branded to scream like he did, but in his eyes, as well as thinking about something. It was truly nonsensical, having a wandering mind during an ordeal to this degree. He was thinking about the things he could have done, he should have done. What if he had kept the goggles on? He would have been safe, and there would have been no harm done.

He struggled off the ground, and opened his eyes. Although there was nothing he could see, he imagined the science room, and headed to where the eye shower was. It would all be over soon. He was walking, thinking that he was near the shower, and finally stopped. It was odd though, since he was not at the shower, and something had stopped him.

The student’s eyes were fully open now, although he was blind, and he groped himself down to his stomach, where he had been feeling a bit of discomfort. He grasped a cylindrical object, and felt its length, a pole in the theater, and he felt its depth, through him. The student brought his hand up, and felt his fingers, with a wet sensation. His pain from both situations forgotten, he began to chuckle, and laugh harder, but no one laughed with him. No one could see he had hurt himself further, but no one understood the laughter either.

He tried and tried, and finally, he got himself off of the pole and walked to the door of the classroom. He was walking, easy as if nothing had happened to him, and he fell. It was not a soft fall, but not a hard fall. Something was odd about it though, and he tried to find out what. He failed in that, so decided to get up again, but oddly enough had no strength to walk. When he finally did, he felt his legs crumble underneath him, and a sickening crack that ran up his spine but did not register in his brain. In fact, nothing registered in his brain. He began to lose it.

Laughing and cackling, the student sat on the ground, immobile. He laid down, still laughing, and heard nothing from the crowd but the echo of his own laughter, the sad, sorry laughter of the student who was so smart but yet so stupid. It was more thoughts and realization that came to him, and he began to curse and swear at himself more, loudly in front of the crowd.

Somebody would come now, someone to stop my words, to stop my pain, to stop my misery. The paramedics would come take me away, and in the morning I would just wake up from a dream, and nothing would have happened. Nobody dies in dreams.
“Over here!” a pause, “Oh my god, its worse now. Get him away.”

Footsteps, but they were not taking him away, no, that’s not what they were doing. They were, but nothing registered in the boy’s mind externally except for the thoughts of sad hope and horrible regret that the made up in the depths of his mind. He brought his head up, and banged it against the ground with all his might, since they would not help him. He banged, and banged, and the blood spilled out; the student died.
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