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A Glass Thought

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Lucid

I think the story is going well. I know that you probably have a direction you plan on taking it, and therefore you are leading the characters in a specific direction, but I kept hoping for a confrontation between Jared and Noah. Maybe that comes later. I like the Noah character. Crazy religious people that use to be criminals are very interesting. For some reson this reminds me of another story that I can't place.

A Glass Thought

I do have a direction for some of the characters. As for a confrontation between the two... maybe. I can tell you that what's going to happen could be considered a definite cause for friction between them two, if not all the characters. Thanks for reading it through. I know it's long.

Anyone else care to offer some feedback?

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gohn67

Is this the end? I'll read it once you get to the end.

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A Glass Thought

I would post it all, but it isn't finished yet. And the big problem is it's length. I mean, it's already long, but the more I write, the longer it get's, and right now I don't think i'm even halfway yet. So I guess I'm going to have to finish it, and then consider whether or not to post it in parts or create a link somewhere else where you can read the whole thing.

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A Glass Thought

So i guess this is dead until finished. Correct?

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