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Well, taxed, I wanted to comment on this since no one else had. I rather enjoyed it. I like the very poetic style of it. "Who cares foolish youth for your extravaganzas" This doesn't make sense to me, maybe a wrong word?? I don't know. Also, "Graveyard work without the gratuity of a shovel" I absolutely love this line. I got two interpretations from this, one is funny, one is sad. I am not sure which you intended but I like them both. Good peice.
Ben
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