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09-27-2005, 05:02 PM
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It'd be great to write my own ending, if i get any good ideas you'll be the first to know.
The elf penis belongs to the link you provided earlier in the thread. You know, the picture of the Prince, the naked elf . . . naked.lol
Who is Leglas? WHO IS LEGOLAS?!
He's the elf in Lord Of The Rings!!!
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09-27-2005, 07:53 PM
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Writing Machine
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Oh yeah--that penis. I forgot I commissioned nudity for that one. You're the first to comment on it. Figured the ladies would be more likely to that.
That penis was supposed to make ME happy. It was my picture. The guys been making me slave over keyboards most of my life, Figured I should get something out of it.
I know THAT Legolas. I thought you might have meant an older forum member of something. I try not to assume
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09-27-2005, 10:12 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Fergus, Ontario CA
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re: last entry
You are right Wyndstar, I did love it. Thank you for putting us all back into our mundane lives, albeit richer by many questions. It was nice to be a child again. That is how I felt reading it. You are an inspiration to me.
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09-27-2005, 11:27 PM
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Mentor
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: cape cod, USA
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Hey Wyndstar,
A great ending for the story. Admiting that since life is story that never ends, your story about life can't end.
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“I can see his point.” Strangedaze reasoned solemnly “Because we’re all dreaming at once. If we all admit we dreamed this, all of us, at the same time, then we have to admit that it might have been more than a dream, and then we might have to admit that there’s more to reality than just the dream.”
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This could have been written by SD himself.Laughing like hell!
Your ingenuity at using a ready made cast of oddball characters, was a stroke of genius.
Thanks Wyndstar! |
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09-28-2005, 12:42 AM
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Ink Slinger
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So that was it? No pat ending? Great! Now I have to do some thinking and figure out what this is about, and you know I'm not good at that...
Seriously though, I really enjoyed this story, it was just alot of fun to read, especially becuase the characters are forums members.
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09-28-2005, 08:28 PM
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I finally read this! I thought it was a serial when I was checking out the short story forum, and thought I must have missed a bunch of episodes.
I was wrong!
Wyndstar, this is a WF instant classic. I loved it! I think I need to read it again to really understand my portrayal, but I really liked it! It was so cool seeing all the WF members as characters. You had them down to a tee. 
For some reason, this reminded me uncannily of the Dark Tower series by Stephen King. I guess it was the surreal nature and mystery of the piece.
Very cool Wyndstar!
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09-28-2005, 10:41 PM
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Sorry it took me so long!
 I loved it...especially because I was in it! It was hilarious....cracked me up.
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“I’m not waiting.” An aggressive female growl poked at semteck.
It didn’t surprise him to learn that Lone Wolf was that kind of girl.
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lmao finally, someone gets it right! I'm off to go read it again...wonderful piece, pure genius! 
LW
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09-28-2005, 10:50 PM
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Writing Machine
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Well, I'm glad you all liked it. As of now, you're all copywrited and property of @Me. I own your property rights, which gives me permission for the next one which will be perverted, adult, twisted and lacking completely in any moral restraint. I get to have intimate relations with which ever male forum member I find deliscious. The ladies may petition me to do the same with males they find that way. All males are fair game except Rico. He has choice.
Of course, this won't be for a while. I have to recover from this one. So you have time to think of who you want to get dirty with, or I get to pick for you. Again, its my right. I own you all now, Bwahahahaha, and I plan on expanding my holdings to anyone you all want me to suck in.
No, I'm serious. There WILL be sex scenes.
Graff, are you over 18...?
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09-28-2005, 11:02 PM
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lmao being owned by Wyndstar was so not in the WF contract I signed! But...I already have a few ideas for my choice...muahahaha...but I do trust you!
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Originally Posted by semtecks
I merged with Lone wolf . . .? That's probably what I would try to do if I met her in a bar
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lol funny...but remember, I'm the aggressive one here! I put up a fight...just a fair warning 
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09-28-2005, 11:09 PM
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Writing Machine
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Oh! Tell me! You can PM me the names and when I write, I'll tell everyone I paired you on purpose---which I planned to do with everyone anyway to protect privacy (we all have crushes that should be inviolateble by gossip). Except for myself (unless the Prince intervenes as he does) because I have no ego. Or morals. Not sure which one is applicable.
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09-28-2005, 11:12 PM
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Quote:lol funny...but remember, I'm the aggressive one here! I put up a fight...just a fair warning
lol
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09-28-2005, 11:16 PM
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Why do you ask me if I'm over 18 and no one else? Do I appear immature? What posesses you to make such assumptions? I'm horribly offended.
I'm 17.
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09-28-2005, 11:23 PM
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Adept Writer
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your 17, graff? I figured you'd be about twenty five.
Don't question Wyndstar, Graff. She has powers of perception that we can olnly begin to understand . . .
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09-28-2005, 11:27 PM
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Wyndstar is one person I wouldn't mess with, don't worry. I just couldn't resist that joke.
Yes, I'm a 25 year old stuck in a 17 year old body. So you only see the 25 year old part of me...
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