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| Short Stories Short Stories, usually between 500 and 2000 words. |
09-25-2005, 10:00 PM
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But that still would not make them any less,
celebrated, distinguished, eminent, famed, famous, great, illustrious, notable, noted, preeminent, prominent, redoubtable, renowned.
Besides we wouldn't want to carry the fantasy too far. We could all live in giant flowers and get sucked through straws into alternative universes, sure, but you still have to keep it believable. |
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09-25-2005, 10:48 PM
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I can still dog you y'know---this isn't over.
Although, a special doggie house is reserved for bobothegoat (is bobo a boy or a girl?).
And as for way out---I'm a cruel, evil creature with a twisted brain. I watch Monty Python for heaven's sake. We'll see about 'believable'...
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09-26-2005, 12:38 AM
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Woof
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09-26-2005, 11:37 AM
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Nawwww---I wouldn't exactly say 'woof' for where you all are going.
Know any good Trojan commercials...?
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09-26-2005, 02:52 PM
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so, am i getting this right? i merged with strangedaze and gohn??? as in, we all became one???
like some form of Super Writer?
honestly, i don't think this world will ever be ready for something of that magnitude.
vodka
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09-26-2005, 03:15 PM
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That was the strangest thing I've read in a while, but also hilarious. Are you sure you weren't on acid, while writing this. |
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09-26-2005, 09:31 PM
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Nawwww---I wouldn't exactly say 'woof' for where you all are going.
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~circles around and finds a nice corner to whimper in~ |
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09-27-2005, 12:06 AM
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 I'm a gender-confused hobbit! Well, we all know what the age-old cliche is. Be careful what you... I'm not even going to say it.
(btw, it's he, in case you're wondering)
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09-27-2005, 11:13 AM
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re: MOI
Wow, I didn't read the last part until just now because from the title I thought it was for bobothegoat. (And because I have been given some work to do and that I have completely forgotten how to do my job doesn't seem to be getting me out of it.) But there I am again in the story! MOI! ME! HOORAY!
Boy did you ever nail me with that "screaming like a little girl" description. That is exactly how I scream whenever I get too close to a bee. Did I get laid there? Everyone else seemed too. I love the confusion of this one, the way your stories take shape after reading. Fantasies on crystal meth and dilaudid.
The ending, the points of light approaching, that is wierd too. It is very close to this metaphor I have recently been developing pertaining to consciousness. I'm trying to remember if I mentioned it to you and I'm pretty sure I haven't. Maybe I better PM you on that, lest I/we be thought nuts, and correctly so.
I think I like this 3rd part best of all! Hilarious. What a trip. You are right too. Acid would only bring you down Wyndstar.
Chris
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09-27-2005, 12:28 PM
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Well then Chris, you're going to love the last entry...
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09-27-2005, 01:11 PM
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Brilliance really wasn’t brilliance, unless there was someone who thought it was.
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that's brilliant.
sigh... looks like i'm going to have to read this maybe a couple more times... i'll get there, slowly but surely...
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09-27-2005, 01:59 PM
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You see, Wyndstar. I go away for a little while and you write me up . . . I was impressed though. How did you know my favorate plant is the Venus Fly Trap?
I merged with Lone wolf . . .? That's probably what I would try to do if I met her in a bar
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09-27-2005, 02:53 PM
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I don't really know how I kenw a lot of things, semtecks. Didn't know how you'd like which plant, didn't know how Chris would scream like a girl, didn't know but I wrote it anyway, didn't I?
Makes you wonder, huh...?
Oh yeah, welcome back. Figured you'd be back on the day I finished abusing you all. Just about as weird, huh?
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09-27-2005, 03:26 PM
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Sometimes, Wyndstar, you scare me -- i am referring to the Elf penis. No wonder Legolas was always so happy. Oh, if you want to make Chris scream, its easy . . . show him some grammar mistakes. lol
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09-27-2005, 03:31 PM
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Naw, I don't make errors to make Chris scream like a girl...
Did I mention anything about penises?
Does that have something to do with you writing your own ending? If so, feel free to email me the thing when its done. I suppose one more dream entry (yes, a lot of this came from actual dreaming) based on it should prove er---disturbing.
Who is Legolas?
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