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Old 09-13-2005, 09:48 PM   #16
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Hey eggo!!

I loved this piece!! God's sarcasm is priceless! And it makes a hell of a lot of sense!!! ('scuse the pun... ) Trust the human race to outlive itself!!

I don't think there's much more I can say that hasn't already been said...I just wanted to add my two cents worth!!
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Old 09-13-2005, 09:48 PM   #17
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Hey eggo!!

I loved this piece!! God's sarcasm is priceless! And it makes a hell of a lot of sense!!! ('scuse the pun... ) Trust the human race to outlive itself!!

I don't think there's much more I can say that hasn't already been said...I just wanted to add my two cents worth!!
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Old 09-13-2005, 09:51 PM   #18
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Old 09-14-2005, 07:41 PM   #19
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But, I have learned that in order to grow as a writer, I've got to start recognizing my flaws (hundreds)and correct them. So what i've started doing is to print a hard copy and correct it while watching the evil TV. It gives me something to do during commercials and most stuff only occupies a small percentage of anyone's brain. Give it a shot.
Hmmm...that's pretty smart. I think I'll start doing that as well. Thanks for the tip!!
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Old 09-14-2005, 09:08 PM   #20
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Hey Keridwen,

Posted twice you liked it some much! Thanks for the Kudos.

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Hmmm...that's pretty smart. I think I'll start doing that as well. Thanks for the tip!!
Let me know if it works for you.
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Old 09-14-2005, 11:32 PM   #21
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Very funny, right on the money
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Old 09-15-2005, 09:07 PM   #22
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Since it looks like everything has been said... I really enjoyed this. Well done.
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Old 09-15-2005, 10:23 PM   #23
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