NoBigThing

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Kimberly Bird

Hi NoBigThing, how are you. This was a nice story dedicated to someone you love. I hope you passed this on to Caroline.

Aside from the personal story you shared with us, and I know you did say you wrote this when tired, but try and edit it a bit

I'ts always nice to read when someone grows and appreciates when friendship is given.

Best of luck in your writings

Kimberly

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NoBigThing

Thanks for your comment. I will try and do some editting as soon as I'm feeling up to it. Last few weeks I haven't had much desire for being creative this way except for a much shorter story I wrote in thirty minutes which also needs some editting done I oughta make work of it!

Thanks for the nice comment though

giglioviola

Sounds a little kindergartenish. As in it is like "She was happy. They all went to the park. They had lots of fun."

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